Tuesday, 25 April 2017

Self Evaluation



Leeds College of Art
BA (Hons) ILLUSTRATION
Level
04
OUIL401 Context of Practice
Credits
20
End of Module Self Evaluation

NAME
Meghan Armitage


1.     What skills have you developed through this module and how effectively do you think you have applied them?

Throughout the course of the module I have developed my collage skills by focusing on how I can convey a message using visual methods. I have attempted to make my designs as intriguing which I believe has improved throughout the whole of my visual journal. I have also improved my skills in analysing texts and selecting important quotes and statements to be used in my research. My opinions of society (especially objectification of women) has changed and I am now a lot more knowledgeable on the subject due to extensive research and looking at the views of others.


2.     What approaches to/methods of research have you developed and how have they informed your practical outcomes?


Before the module, I would not have considered looking into depth at different texts and imagery when creating my own visual response. The use of looking at artist’s work has inspired my own work and allowed me to develop my skills further. Researching further into the quote as well as the overarching theme has informed my practical work because of learning how women are viewed and objectified in the media and pornography.







3.     What strengths can you identify in your work and how have/will you capitalise on these?

The strengths in my work can be clearly identified in my essay, in particular the triangulation and referencing section where I have managed to hide my own opinion and provide evidence and support for the statements that have been made. My visual journal also shows strengths as it shows experimentation and a clear understanding of my intentions. Wherever my intentions have changed in my visual journal I have made it clear in my blog.



4.     What weaknesses can you identify in your work and how will you address these in the future?

Throughout the module my weaknesses are clear in the consistency of ideas in my visual journal as they may seem mixed up when viewed as I focus on different areas of objectifying women throughout. Some pieces of work may also seem less considered where the message I am trying to convey is less clear. Weaknesses may also be identified in the essay where the essay doesn’t have enough evidence to back up my points.





5.     Identify five things that you feel will benefit you during next years Context of Practice module?

·       Developing a time plan to allow me to keep on track in the module.
·       Using the library to find books that could be useful sources for my development.
·       Attending more lectures to aid my knowledge in the module as a whole as well as in my own personal work.
·       Focusing on how to use the Harvard Referencing System properly.
·       Experimenting more in my visual responses by using different materials and mediums.


6.How would you grade yourself on the following areas:
(please indicate using an ‘x’) 

5= excellent, 4 = very good, 3 = good, 2 = average, 1 = poor

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Attendance



x

Punctuality


x


Motivation

x



Commitment
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Quantity of work produced


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Quality of work produced



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Contribution to the group


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The evaluation of your work is an important part of the assessment criteria and represents a percentage of the overall grade. It is essential that you give yourself enough time to complete your written evaluation fully and with appropriate depth and level of self-reflection. If you have any questions relating to the self-evaluation process speak to a member of staff as soon as possible.

Proposal

Final Essay

“In his studio the artist has no social responsibility but when the artist displays his work the situation changes”
Shrigley, David (2015) Untitled, synthetic polymer paint on paper, Department International Prints and Drawings, National Gallery of Victoria, Melbourne. 153.0 × 111.0 cm

This quote has been researched and understood by analysing a number of texts that relate to the overarching theme, society. The main themes of the texts are sexuality and objectification of women in the media. John Berger’s ‘Ways of Seeing’ focuses on how women have been portrayed as objects in art, especially in nude classical paintings where he explains “To be naked is to be oneself. To be nude is to be seen by others and yet not recognised for oneself. A naked body has to be seen as an object in order to become a nude.” Assuming the spectator of the image is a heterosexual male being the owner and spectator of the painting and the naked woman as something he has ownership of. The source also focuses on how the objectification of women has become less popular in past art forms and is now viewed more in the media such as magazines. This is explained in the quote “In modern art the category of the nude has become less important…Today the attitudes and values which informed that tradition is expressed through other more widely diffused media-advertising, journalism, television.”

 A similar view to John Berger’s statements is also expressed in Daniel Chandler’s ‘Notes on the Gaze’ where he focuses on modern photography in advertising explaining that “In some well-known studies found that pupil dilation can also be a reflection of sexual attraction, and that photographs of female models in which the pupils had been artificially enlarged.” The two texts are similar as they both explain how women have been objectified for centuries throughout art starting from classical paintings and slowly becoming more invested in the media as a method of selling products to consumers who are assumed to be male. The two texts were both written within 30 years of one another. John Berger’s text being the oldest in 1972 and Daniel Chandler’s in 1998. These two sources may be seen as reliable as they printed in books which cannot be edited unlike the internet. However, the opinions of the sources may seem outdated. David Gauntlett’s ‘Media, Gender and Identity’ (written in 2002) focuses more on the media of the modern day and how women are portrayed in magazines and television. This text explains “The traditional views of a woman as a housewife or low-status worker has been kick-boxed out of the picture by the feisty, successful ‘girl power’ icons.” The source has the complete opposite tone to what the first two analysed sources have mentioned. This makes it seem as though the objectification of women in the media is no longer happening. It also explains how magazines now influence and concentrate on making both genders better people for each other as well as themselves. This is mentioned in the quote “Magazines are often centred on helping men to be considerate lovers, useful around the home, healthy, fashionable, and funny – in particular, being able to laugh at themselves.” As well as “Magazines for young women are empathetic in their determination that women must do their thing.”

When reading the David Guantlett ‘Media, Gender and Identity’ article as a whole it explains that the objectification of women is no longer an issue in modern society. Especially, through the influence of magazines in which the text explains that “there is a generation of younger men who have adapted to the modern world, who have grown up with women as their equals, and who do not feel threatened or emasculated by these social changes.” As the media focuses on making men a lot more considerate towards women in society. This article has a completely different tone of voice compared to the John Berger and Daniel Chandler texts as it speaks more positively of society and how it keeps improving with women being a lot less objectified in the media. However, the text as a whole seems to only focus on magazines rather than television and the internet which could make it seem unreliable. This article was written in 2002 making it seem more reliable than the first two analysed sources. Although, ‘Stanford Encyclopaedia of Philosophy – Feminist Perspectives on Objectification’ was written in 2016 which is even closer to the present day than the David Guantlett article.

Stanford Encyclopaedia of Philosophy – Feminist Perspectives on Objectification focuses on different elements of objectification of women such as instrumentality, violability, reduction to body and silencing which immediately makes the article seem a lot stronger than the David Guantlett text as it goes into more depths of objectification. It also speaks about how women are still used in the media as sexualised objects which proves that the David Guantlett text seems to be naïve to. The text mentions “Due to men’s consumption of pornography, women as a group are reduced to the status of mere tools for men’s purposes.” Which makes an argument against the David Gauntlett text which explains that the media no longer objectifies women even though porn is still being consumed at a high rate which is even higher than before as the most popular porn magazines which as Zoo and FHM have been closed down which is explained in a Guardian article “The lads’ mag market has been especially hard hit by new technology and changing habits due to the easy availability of nudity and pornography on the internet and the decline of the specific form of ‘lad culture’ that helped make the titles so successful.” This point made by the Guardian further backs up the point made by the Stanford Encyclopaedia of Philosophy article as it explains that objectification of women still exists even if it is not seen in magazines as often. This text relates back to the John Berger text as it mentions “In order to gain social acceptability, women are under constant pressure to correct their bodies and appearance.” Making it similar to Berger’s point of “She has to survey everything she is and everything she does because of how she appears to others, and ultimately how she appears to men. The argument as a whole when analysing and researching further into these texts proves that women have always been objectified through different forms of art and media.


Francisco Goya ‘The Nude Maja’ (1797-1800) is an oil painting of a nude woman that has been specifically painted for the pleasure of a heterosexual male spectator which is clearly seen as the woman is gazing out of the painting and looking at the male. This point is emphasised as the consideration of the rule of thirds and line of sight have been used as she is stretched diagonally across the page with the main elements of the woman’s body (breasts, genitals, waist and hips) being more central, covering the large majority of the piece. Composition has also been considered in the use of value as the background areas of the image are a lot darker than the more frontal elements of the image, especially the pale skin of the woman which makes her the focal point. The painting was created in 1797-1800. ‘The Nude Maja’ is most well-known for how she gazes out of the image at the spectator, making herself enticing. As well as the rumour that the woman was possibly the mistress of Francisco Goya himself. The painting was painted alongside another where the woman is fully clothed to give to the wealthy male patron who requested them. The clothed painting was presumably painted to hang over the top of the nude to hide it when there were visitors. This point relates to John Berger’s ‘Ways of Seeing’ where he explains “To be naked is to be oneself. To be nude is to be seen naked by others and yet not recognised for oneself. A naked body has to be seen as an object in order to become a nude.” This quote emphasises how women were objectified in society during this period as the nude painting is hidden away from viewers other than the spectator who owns it as her naked body is seen as private that only one person can see, the male who bought the painting. Daniel Chandler’s ‘Notes on the Gaze’ text further supports how the woman has been sexualised in this painting as he explains “To gaze implies more than to look at – it signifies a psychological relationship of power, in which the gazer is superior to the object of the gaze.” Meaning the male spectator of the image is more important than the woman in the painting and he has complete ownership of her.

Similarly, a propaganda poster from the ‘Torches of Freedom’ campaign with the phrase “Blow in her face and she’ll follow you anywhere” is a strong example of women being objectified in the media. The background of the image uses yellow/orange tones which could be seen as romanticising the scenario that the two people are in, almost like a sunset. The woman is also placed slightly lower and looking up towards the man making her appear smaller and lower status than him which relates back to how women are objectified in media as a method of consumerism. This point is strengthened with a point from Daniel Chandler’s ‘Notes on the Gaze’ where he explains “Men tend to be located higher than women in these ads, symbolically reflecting the routine subordination of women to men in society.” This image was created in the 1960s to promote the sale of cigarettes to both a male and female audience. This particular poster is aimed at heterosexual young men as the woman in the image suits society’s standards of beauty during that era meaning the men may think that they will be able to attract a woman of that standard if they begin smoking. The point of how women are objectified in media is also mentioned in the ‘Encyclopaedia of Philosophy – Feminist Perspectives on Objectification’ such as “There is a powerful objectifier on one hand, and the other hand there exists his powerless victim.” This can be clearly seen in the image as one blow of the cigarette smoke appears to almost hypnotise her meaning he has power over her. In this advertisement, the woman has been objectified for means of consumerism to promote the sale of cigarettes making the use of women a strong selling point.

Objectification of women is still largely seen across different forms of media in the present day. Claudia Chanhoi expresses this through her work. Such as her “Ready-to-eat Pâté” piece. The message of the piece is to express how women are sexualised in advertisements to sell products. This is expressed through the text of the image with the phrase “ready-to-eat” and a symbol of a female breast showing how easy it is to use women as a method of consumerism. The colours are minimal throughout the whole image with elements of pink which has connotations of femininity as well as skin which can be seen in the piece. The image has been created using vectors to make the shapes as simplistic as possible but the objects still look representational. Claudia began creating this kind of work when she began working on a project called ‘Sexual Objectification of Women’. As well as growing up in Hong Kong with a Catholic family, meaning she was taught that women’s sexuality is seen as vulnerable. This work creates an argument against David Guantlett’s ‘Media, Gender and Identity’ text which focuses on how women are no longer objectified in magazines as well as mentioning “Identity is today seen as more fluid and transformable than ever before.” But the work that Claudia Chanhoi is making a light-hearted approach to how women are used as sex objects to sell products. Her work is also supported by the ‘Encyclopaedia of Philosophy – Feminist Perspectives on Objectification’ mentions “all the focus is placed on a woman’s body, in a way that her mind or personality are not adequately acknowledged.” This emphasises the images that Claudia creates as the media rarely uses a woman’s intelligence to promote a product. Claudia Chanhoi’s work has a humorous approach towards how women are sexualised in the media. Although, the work may seem funny when it is looked into further it is clear that the message of the work is making a joke out of how women are still being used in Western countries.


The most used theme in this visual journal in response to David Shrigley’s quote is how women are objectified in the media, focusing prominently on pornography. The practical response to the quote visualises how women are constantly objectified in the media for a male spectator’s pleasure. In pornography, the focal point of the image tends to be the woman’s body. Throughout the majority of the visual journal the focus is on whether the photographer has considered the compositional elements such as line of sight and rule of thirds. This is most clear in one of the practical responses where the image of a woman has been split into segments to exaggerate the focal point of the image further as well as making the line of sight become more noticeable. This is supported by John Berger’s quote “The easy solution for the photographer is to turn the photographer to turn the figure into a nude which, by generalising both sight and viewer and making sexuality unspecific, turns desire into fantasy.” This supports this particular practical piece as it is clear in the original image that there has been no intended use of line of sight. The image has been analysed in depth to try and create a consideration of composition. It could be argued that the photographer hasn’t considered more creative skills because the audience of the magazine only focus on the women’s bodies. This relates to the problems in society because of how the person who has taken the pornographic photographs hasn’t had to use the skill of considering composition as they didn’t feel the need to because the audience of the magazine will not be focusing on the artistic skill but rather objectify the woman in the image.

This practical piece relates to the Francisco Goya ‘Nude of Maja’. This is because the woman in the painting is placed diagonally across the image in a similar position to the woman in the pornographic image which shows a consideration for the rule of thirds. Compositional elements such as value of light and dark tones can also be seen in both images. The women in each image stand out from the background because the tonal values are a dark compared to the light toned skin of the women making them the focal point. As well as the consideration of composition the painting and the pornographic collage relate because of how they have been objectified for the spectator’s pleasure. This statement is supported by John Berger’s ‘Ways of Seeing’ which explains “Thus she turns herself into an object – and most particularly an object of vision: a sight.” This speaks about how women were seen for the pleasure of the spectator and how the woman is objectifying herself which still happens today which is explained in the Encyclopaedia of Philosophy – Feminist Perspectives on Objectification where it states “All the focus is placed on a woman’s body, in a way that her mind or personality are not adequately acknowledged.” This shows how women’s bodies have always been used for male’s pleasure whether it is in a classical painting or the media.




The visual journal also focuses on how women are objectified in the media as a method of consumerism. This is focused on in some aspects of the journal through means of collage where pornographic material has been used alongside products from advertisements which creates a sense of humour, almost making a joke out of existing adverts such as Herbal Essences. Herbal Essences’ adverts are often seen as oversexualised and borderline pornographic. This idea is expressed through the visual journal, especially in one of the practical responses consisting of a collage involving a woman from a pornographic magazine in an explicit pose whilst appearing to hold a shampoo bottle. This practical response is supported in a quote from Daniel Chandler’s ‘Notes on the Gaze’ which states “Men tend to be located higher than women in these ads, symbolically reflecting the routine subordination of women and men in society.” This quote relates the idea of using pornographic content of women to advertise products such as Herbal Essences through collaging methods. This piece from the visual journal relates to the overarching theme of society because of how women are used in the media is sexualised objects as a method of consumerism. The Encyclopaedia of Philosophy – Feminist Perspectives on Objectification supports this statement in the quote “Money is the medium of force and provides the cover of consent.” Although, this statement from the article is speaking specifically about pornography, it can be related back to women who are used as objects in advertisements because of how women feel like they don’t have a choice other than to be sexualised to earn a living. This is also emphasised by David Guantlett’s ‘Media, Gender and Identity’ which mentions “Men’s magazines have an almost obsessive relationship with the socially constructed nature of manhood.” This explains how men are almost hypnotised into objectifying women by being more masculine.

This piece of work in the visual journal was inspired by the Torches of Freedom campaign poster with the slogan “Blow in her face and she’ll follow you anywhere.” The woman in the Torches of Freedom poster because of how she appears to be hypnotised by the man blowing cigarette smoke in her face, making her an object for male desire. A similar idea is also expressed in the visual journal piece because of how the woman’s body from the porn magazine is used as a method of selling the product. The only difference is that the visual journal piece is a more explicit version of the Torches of Freedom which makes it more relatable in today’s society where everything appears to be more sexualised and erotic than images in the past.





  
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